Fantasy Romance
The pieces of wood that had seemed so foolish strapped to his feet in the throne room were a boon on the endless expanses of unbroken snow.
But Prince Thomas didn’t mention it, nor did the two shadow warriors he traveled with.
For the best. They had all crossed enemy lines three moons ago, and Prince Thomas had no idea when or if he would see his home again.
Lorik studied the hunchback as she mounted her massive white charger easily even in her full armor.
Despite the oppressive heat, she stayed bundled in her cloak.
As civilization fell behind them, the old man nodded toward her. “You must be hot, and we are well past where others can see you.”
She paused then sighed. “He might as well know the truth sooner than later.”
“What truth…” Lorik’s jaw fell open as she shrugged off the cloak and revealed a pair of fluffy white wings.
“That I am a half-breed abomination. But I’m still going to destroy Thorn.”
Soul mates. The person that completes you, that is your other half. This person is more than true love. This is the person that literally shares a piece of your soul.
You’re drawn together even if you hate each other. Your souls will find a way to reunite…
Sorry, I don’t buy it.
If, for some chance you do have one true soul mate, how are you going to find them among the over seven billion people in this world?
I suppose you could say the halves of the soul are somehow attracted to each other, but what are the chances you’ll speak the same language? Have been brought up in the same culture?
I’m a romance writer, and I read a lot of the genre. While I’ve seen soul mates used a lot, it almost never explained how it works. Was a soul ripped in half so each character only has half a soul (might explain a few people I know)? Are they like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle? Or maybe mirror images of each other?
I can’t think of a single time an author used soul mates and I didn’t think they were mailing it in by relying on this to bring togtether characters that had no other reason to be together.
It’s like the author chased the characters up a tree, and then along came a handy-dandy zeppelin to get them down.
Given my preferences, if I read that the main characters are soul mates in the book blurb, I don’t buy it. If I find it out they’re soul mates later in the story itself, I tend not to finish the book as I usually can’t stop rolling my eyes. After the eighth or ninth eye roll, I’m worried they’re going to get stuck in my skull and decide it’s time to put away the offending book.
Yes, I love romance, and I love happily ever afters, but the characters have to earn it. It’s part of what makes the endings so delicious.
If the story has enemies become lovers, I can buy that. Seen it often enough in real life.
But if the story wants enemies to fall in love with each other? That’s tougher, but put them through a strong enough crucible in the story, and I can buy it. I want to buy it. I like reading romances. I want the characters to get together. But I also want to believe it.
Tell me they overcome their hate for each other because they’re soul mates? I’ll smile politely and slide that book over to the “don’t waste my precious reading time” pile.
Authors can bring together difficult characters, even characters that might strongly dislike each other at first. We believe the change in how they feel about each other through repeated interactions between the characters, with them learning through these interactions that they’d misjudged the other.
If they haven’t misjudged the other, than we need the characters to change and realize why their preconceived notion was wrong. And it has to more than, “oh, but I love this person, so clearly I was wrong all this time.”
The more you want the change, the more the plot has to challenge them.
Social Identity Theory tells me it’s not going to happen easily. The bigger the change, the harder it’s going to be to make it happen.
You see the enemies (or at least adversaries) become lovers a lot in television, especially when the writers have multiple seasons to build the romance.
Most romance novels don’t have multiple seasons, but it’s still doable in a single book. After all, in a romance novel, the whole point of the plot is to get the characters together. Yes, it’s possible, and most of us can think of some characters that we loved seeing get together even though they were ready to kill each other at the beginning of their relationship.
Done right, it makes an amazing an unforgettable romance. Done wrong, and an author has to tell me the characters get together because they’re soul mates and just can’t live without each other.
*eye roll*
How about you? Do you believe in soul mates? If so, why? I’m open to changing my mind! Have you ever read a soul mates story that was very well done? What made it good?